Wednesday, November 3, 2010

Kahlil's descriptive writing

Photo 1
I smell chinese dumplings, sweet chilli, scorching hot oil, noodles, crispy duck and ginger.  Chatting, laughing and stomping footsteps fill the fragrant streets.  Children running, walking hand in hand with their parents rush to school.  People scurry like little ants through the noisy, crowded anxious streets.

Photo 2
The sky blue water ripples like a duvet cover on a bed as it is blown by the calm wind.  Trees on the waters edge stand like statues not moving, so quiet and peaceful.  Mountains soar up like a laughing Buddha's belly in the distance.  In my imagination this looks like a gateway to heaven.

Photo 3
Lovely and peaceful is the untouched moon, so silent and cold with no life, shining its way through the star lit sky.  The austere planet gives me shivers up my spine and makes me feel unwelcomed.  This landscape like massive plates of sand on a waiters tray is being carried into the dark and twinkling night sky.


Hope you like it

Kahlil 6LBa

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